Question

在日常學(xué)習(xí)、工作和生活中，學(xué)會(huì)與人合作非常重要。為此，你班貼出了一張通知。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)通知、寫作要點(diǎn)和要求寫一篇英語演講稿。

Notice Our monitor suggests that we hold an English Speech on January 25th. Everyone is invited to attend the speech. Those who will attend it, please get ready for your speech before it. The topic of the speech is “Being a good partner”. March 23th, 2014

寫作要點(diǎn)：
1. 與人合作的重要性;  2. 怎樣成為一個(gè)好的合作伙伴（2-3條建議); 3. 你理想的合作伙伴是怎樣的。
寫作要求：
1. 短文填寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域;     2. 短文詞數(shù)不少于100(不含已寫好的部分);
3. 內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫;  4. 書寫須清楚、工整。
Good afternoon, everyone!                                                        
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
That’s all. Thank you.  

Answer 1

One possible version
Good afternoon , everyone! The topic of my speech today is “being a good partner”. Cooperation is a good way for us to learn from each other as well as to save us a lot of time and energy Thus we can complete our work successful and efficiently.
How can we become a good partner? My suggestion are as follows. Firstly, we should try to listen to others’ opinions and never force your ideas on others. Secondly, no one in the world is perfect. Let’s learn to put up with their shortcomings and discover their advantages, which will surely encourage each other to do the best.
As far as I’m concerned, when I am lucky enough to find someone who is easy-going and warm-hearted to cooperate with, it will make us feel very happy. On the other hand, However, a person who is hard-working and strong-minded will have a good effect on me. Hope you are a good partner for me.
That’s all. Thank you!

解析試題分析:提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文包含了寫作要點(diǎn)：1.合作的重要性；2.對(duì)怎樣成為一個(gè)好的合作伙伴提出了first、second兩條建議；3. 描述了自己理想的合作伙伴。文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如My suggestion are as follows. As far as I’m concerned和who引導(dǎo)的定語從句.，還運(yùn)用了put up with、have a good effect on等。并注意了句子句子之間的銜接如用Thus，However，On the other hand等等。
考點(diǎn):提綱類作文。