Question

16．很多學(xué)校都開設(shè)了體育選修課（the selective PE lesson），如游泳、體操（gymnastics），籃球、足球、武術(shù)（martial art）、國(guó)際標(biāo)準(zhǔn)舞蹈（international ballroom dancing）、乒乓球（table tennis）等．請(qǐng)談?wù)勀阆矚g的體育選修課并說明原因．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文要求考生寫你最喜歡的體育選修課以及原因．也就是最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)和原因．文中給出了游泳、體操（gymnastics），籃球、足球、武術(shù)（martial art）、國(guó)際標(biāo)準(zhǔn)舞蹈（international ballroom dancing）、乒乓球（table tennis），以及其他，考生需選擇最熟悉最有話可寫的一個(gè)來寫作．注意在寫作中應(yīng)用上高水平的句型以及詞匯詞組，來增加作文亮點(diǎn)，使作文脫穎而出．
重要短語：
both physically and psychologically，身心上，a good way to，做什么的好辦法．
高分句子：
1．So long as we are carefully enough，sports can do us nothing but good．句中So long as 引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句，意為只要．
2．That is why I like swimming lesson．本句含有重要句式，That is why…這就是..的原因．

解答 There are many kinds of interesting sports for the selective PE lesson，such as basketball，football，swimming and running，but the most I like is swimming．（點(diǎn)明主題）
     When I was a little child，my father took me to the river which near my house to learn swimming．Then，I found it's really fun and cool when I swim in the water，especially in summer，It's the most exciting thing to do when summer comes．So I like swimming．It's so wonderful．（介紹原因）
     My participation in the selective PE lesson tells me that swimming can make us healthy both physically and psychologically．It is also a good way for people to know each other and can promote friendship between people．So long as we are carefully enough，sports can do us nothing but good．（高分句型）That is why I like swimming lesson．（高分句型）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇文章話題較為簡(jiǎn)單，關(guān)于最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)考生都有話可寫．所以重要的就是寫作時(shí)為了語言的連貫應(yīng)該恰當(dāng)使用連接詞和插入語以及注意高級(jí)詞匯和句式的使用．這才是獲得高分的重點(diǎn)．