Question

15．現(xiàn)在整個世界都在提倡以"綠色"為中心的飲食和生活．那么在我們的校園生活中，提倡建設(shè)"綠色校園"也是很多師生關(guān)注的話題．假定你是學(xué)校《校園生活》報的記者，擬以"Create a green campus"為題寫一篇相關(guān)文章，并把它發(fā)表在報紙上．請按照以下提示寫一篇120字左右英語文章．
1．建設(shè)綠色校園十分重要
　　2．綠色校園指的是…
3．為了建設(shè)綠色校園我們應(yīng)該…

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇話題作文．寫作時，先要提煉要點(diǎn)，包括綠色校園的含義，開展這項(xiàng)活動的背景，活動的意義以及具體的做法．文章是要發(fā)出倡議，要以第一人稱的語氣來講述，時態(tài)要以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主．
重點(diǎn)短語和句型：
set goals 確定目標(biāo)
refer to 指的是
an environmental sense 環(huán)保意識
take part in 參與
take sth seriously 認(rèn)真對待
Green campus not only means creating a green environment on campus，but also refers to the idea that students should be educated to have an environmental sense in their mind．
not only…but also…不但…而且…，連接對等結(jié)構(gòu)；that引導(dǎo)同位語從句修飾ideas．
it is essential for campus to improve students'awareness of environmental protection．
形式主語用法：it作形式主語，真正的主語是后面的動詞不定式．
Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could"green campus"work smoothly and bring benefit to people's well-beings．
only加狀語提前，句子要部分倒裝．

解答 參考范文：
                                                                                                                                             Create a Green Campus
"Green campus"is very important for the students because it sets goals toward the future of the world．（點(diǎn)出主題）
Green campus not only means creating a green environment on campus，but also refers to the idea that students should be educated to have an environmental sense in their mind．（高分句型一）The creation of"Green campus"will greatly encourage students to take part in various environmental protection activities； most importantly，students will be educated to take environmental problems seriously as their own commitment and responsibility．（說明活動意義）
　　Effective measures should be taken to create a green campus．First，it is essential for campus to improve students'awareness of environmental protection．（高分句型二）Second，campus also needs to strengthen its ties with the society，so as to ensure that students could have a better participation in the practical activities．Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could"green campus"work smoothly and bring benefit to people's well-beings．（高分句型三）（具體做法）

點(diǎn)評 書面表達(dá)題考查的是英語的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．