Question

中學(xué)生是否有必要帶手機(jī)去學(xué)校 文體：議論文
[題目要求]
現(xiàn)在， 很多學(xué)生帶手機(jī)上學(xué)。為此， 某英語報在你校組織了一場討論。 討論的主題：中學(xué)生是否有必要帶手機(jī)上學(xué)。 請根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給報社寫一封信，客觀的介紹討論情況。

大多數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為	大多數(shù)老師認(rèn)為	你的觀點
可方便與家長、同學(xué)聯(lián)系，是一種時尚	中學(xué)生年齡尚小，還不能自控；用手機(jī)玩游戲，發(fā)短信浪費(fèi)時間；容易引起攀比；如需打電話，學(xué)校里有公共電話可供使用	追求時尚可以理解，但學(xué)習(xí)是首要任務(wù)

生詞提示：
攀比：vie
追求時尚：follow the fashion
Mobile Phones at school
Dear Editor,
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Yours truly,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.
The majority of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and classmates if they have a mobile phone. And what’s more, it’s the latest fashion.
However, most teachers think middle school students are not old enough to control themselves. It is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phone. And it easily causes the students to vie with each other. If necessary, they could make phone calls by using public phones on the campus.
In my opinion, following the fashion is understandable. But as middle school students, we should put our heart into our studies.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文要求寫議論文，討論的主題：中學(xué)生是否有必要帶手機(jī)上學(xué)。 請根據(jù)表格提供的信息，給報社寫一封信，客觀的介紹討論情況。包括支持的、反對的和個人觀點�？陀^的說明情況用一般現(xiàn)在時，而不用過去時。運(yùn)用有關(guān)句式和一些高級詞匯。還要注意不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯，和句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點說明】文章層次清楚明白，第一段寫寫信的目的，第二、三段分別寫贊成和反對的觀點，最后是個人觀點。文中應(yīng)用了較復(fù)雜的句式，如定語從句、賓語從句和非謂語作主語等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：And what’s more，However, If necessary, In my opinion等等。