Question

6．請根據(jù)下列兩幅圖寫一篇短文，短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個要點：
①媽媽阻止兒子去扶摔倒的女孩；
②兒子對于倒了的油瓶置之不理．
③寫作時要適當(dāng)?shù)匕l(fā)揮，語言連貫，要寫出媽媽的驚詫，還要寫自己對此幅漫畫的感受和觀點．
④詞數(shù)：120左右． 注意：開頭第一句已經(jīng)在答卷中寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 本文為看圖作文．
寫作要點為：①媽媽阻止兒子去扶摔倒的女孩；
②兒子對于倒了的油瓶置之不理．

解答 As can be seen from the cartoons，it is a story about a bad example of family education．In the first picture，a boy was trying to help a girl who fell over on the ground while his Mom persuaded him not to do so，saying"Don't do that，otherwise others would think it was you who knocked her known"．In the second picture，the boy was seen sitting leisurely with an oil bottle lying on the ground besides his feet．Mom was greatly shocked by the explanation from the boy："If I had lifted the oil bottle，you would think that it was me who brought it down．"
I disagree with what the mother did in the story．As we all know，parents are the first teachers．I think parents should not only care for their children's health，but their minds．They should let their children know it's a pleasure to help others who are in trouble．

點評 考生需仔細(xì)觀察圖畫內(nèi)容，理解圖畫的內(nèi)涵．考生需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．