Question

有一批要到中國投資的外國企業(yè)家在我國某城市參觀考察。假定你是接待員，要向外賓們介紹這個城市的概括。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，須包括以下內(nèi)容：
這是一座新興的現(xiàn)代化城市，建于20世紀80年代；
海陸空交通方便，又有一條與首都北京相連的高速公路；
自然資源豐富，電力及其他能源供應充足；
公共秩序良好，政府多方面支持外國投資者。
注意：1 詞數(shù)：100左右。
2 可以適當增減細節(jié)，但不能逐字翻譯。
3 短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：高速公路：freeway   公共秩序：public order  
投資者：investor 供應supplies of
Ladies and Gentlemen,
Welcome to our city. Now let me introduce …

Answer 1

One possible version:
Ladies and Gentlemen,
Welcome to our city. Now let me introduce our city to you. Our city is a newly-built modern city. It was set up in the early 1980s, but it has been developing rapidly. From here you can travel to anywhere by water, by air or by land. Recently another freeway which is connected with Beijing has started being used. The areas around our city are rich in natural resources. And we have enough supplies of electricity and other forms of energy. The public order is very nice. Besides, the governments of our country and our city support foreign investors in many aspects. We expect more and more friends to come and invest in our city.
That’s all. Thank you!

試題解析：從文章體裁分析，本文是一篇記敘文的寫作，寫的是對這座城市的簡單介紹。文章內(nèi)容要點：這是一座新興的現(xiàn)代化城市，建于20世紀80年代；海陸空交通方便，又有一條與首都北京相連的高速公路；自然資源豐富，電力及其他能源供應充足；公共秩序良好，政府多方面支持外國投資者。時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；注意使用連詞和高級詞匯、句型。
【亮點說明】
文章使用了非常好的短語和句子給文章增色，如Recently another freeway which is connected with Beijing has started being used.(定語從句)，but it has been developing rapidly（現(xiàn)在完成進行時）并且主語了句子的銜接如：but，And ,besides,等。