Question

【題目】請(qǐng)結(jié)合材料，按要求用英文寫作。

假如你是李華，隨著共享單車逐漸進(jìn)人海外市場(chǎng)，你的英國(guó)筆友Tom對(duì)此非常感興趣。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件向他介紹共享單車。郵件的內(nèi)容包括以下幾點(diǎn)：

1. 共享單車的使用方法(掃二維碼，解鎖騎車）；

2. 共享單車的便利之處；

3. 詢問(wèn)他共享單車在英國(guó)的情況。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：共享單車shared bikes；二維碼the QR code

Dear Tom,

I am more than delighted to know you show great interest in shared bikes

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Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I am more than delighted to know you show great interest in shared bikes which have received increasing attention at home and abroad. It is my pleasure to introduce them to you.

When you spot a shared bike, what you need to do is just scan the QR code of the bike to unlock it and enjoy your trip. Not only are the shared bikes environmentally friendly and convenient, but also they charge low rates and can be parked almost anytime and anywhere, which have given them advantages over other means of public transport.

With the shared bikes entering the UK, I can’t help but wonder about their situation there. Could you please be kind enough to tell me something about that?

Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】假如你是李華，隨著共享單車逐漸進(jìn)人海外市場(chǎng)，你的英國(guó)筆友Tom對(duì)此非常感興趣。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件向他介紹共享單車。郵件的內(nèi)容包括以下幾點(diǎn)：1. 共享單車的使用方法(掃二維碼，解鎖騎車）；2. 共享單車的便利之處；3. 詢問(wèn)他共享單車在英國(guó)的情況。

本文為說(shuō)明文。文章所給的內(nèi)容比較具體，只要稍加展開即可。時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)即可。寫作時(shí)盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯和多種句式。

亮點(diǎn)本文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)齊全。文章中使用了一些較高級(jí)詞匯如：more than（非常），show great interest in…(對(duì)….感興趣)，give sb advantages over , can’t help but do.., be …enough to do…等，使文章豐富多彩。句式復(fù)雜多樣，既有復(fù)雜句，又有簡(jiǎn)單句。復(fù)合句運(yùn)用的很靈活：既有名詞從句、并列句和倒裝句式。又運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)。這使得文章跌宕起伏，提高了文章的檔次。

第一段運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句（which have received increasing attention at home and abroad）和常用句式：It is my pleasure to introduce them to you，簡(jiǎn)潔明了。

第二段由兩個(gè)復(fù)雜句說(shuō)明了文章的前兩個(gè)點(diǎn)：共享單車的使用方法和共享單車的便利之處。復(fù)雜句（When you spot a shared bike, what you need to do is just scan the QR code of the bike to unlock it and enjoy your trip）中包括一個(gè)由when引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句和由what引導(dǎo)的名詞從句。復(fù)雜句（Not only are the shared bikes environmentally friendly and convenient, but also they charge low rates and can be parked almost anytime and anywhere, which have given them advantages over other means of public transport）中包含由not only…but aslo…引導(dǎo)的倒裝句，一個(gè)由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。本段觀點(diǎn)言簡(jiǎn)意賅，本段中句式也最為復(fù)雜。

最后一段在詢問(wèn)他共享單車在英國(guó)的情況時(shí)，運(yùn)用一個(gè)由with引導(dǎo)的非謂語(yǔ)（With the shared bikes entering the UK）作狀語(yǔ)和一般疑問(wèn)句完成了文章的第三個(gè)內(nèi)容，語(yǔ)言貼切，緊湊。