Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

My father was the biology professor. When I was young he was used to take me to the biology lab, there I saw pigs, cats and other animals. My father also influenced me through nature walks. He often took me on a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs, snakes and firefly. He seemed know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later, think about my father and his influence on my life, I feel very luckily. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn from her. He helps me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes dead around me.

 

Answer 1

1.the ---a

2.was去掉

3.there--where

4.on---for

5.firefly---fireflies

6.seem后面加to

7.think--thinking

8.luckily ---lucky

9.her--him

10.helps—helped

【解析】

試題分析：本文作者回憶了父親給他的影響，表達了對父親的感激。父親是一個生物學教授，知識非常淵博。在作者小時候父親常常帶他去實驗室和野外玩，在那里作者認識了很多動物，也培養(yǎng)了對大自然的愛。

1.考查冠詞。My father was the biology professor. 此處是指父親的職業(yè)，“他是一個教授”，不是特指概念，所以把the改為a。

2. 考查動詞。When I was young he was used to take me to the biology lab。Be used to do“被用來去做”，used to do“過去常�！�，通過句意可知此處指父親過去常常帶我去實驗室，故把was去掉。

3.—where 考查關系副詞�！�…, there I saw pigs, cats and other animals。從結構可知此處是非限制性定語從句，句子是主謂賓結構，判斷用關系副詞，而先行詞是表示地點的詞，故把there改為where。

4. 考查介詞。He often took me on a walk in the backyard. 從語境可知父親常常帶我去后院散步，此處是表示目的，所以把on改為for。

5.firefly---fireflies 考查名詞。We would catch frogs, snakes and firefly. Firefly是可數名詞，此處指類別，應該用復數形式，故把firefly改為fireflies。

6. 考查非謂語動詞。He seemed know everything about wildlife.。固定短語：seem to do sth“似乎做某事”，在seem后面加to。

7.—thinking 考查非謂語動詞。Eighteen years later, think about my father and his influence on my life,…..從句子結構可知此處是非謂語做狀語，think和句子主語之間是主動關系，用現在分詞，所以把think改為thinking。

8. 考查形容詞。I feel very luckily. Feel是系動詞，后面應該用形容詞做表語，把luckily改為lucky。

9..考查代詞。 I am grateful that I got the chance to learn from her.根據上文內容可知此處是指父親，對“我”的影響，所以把her改為him。

10.—helped 考查動詞時態(tài)。He helps me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes dead around me. 文章是回憶父親，全文都用的是過去時，所以把helps改為helped。

考點：考查短文改錯