Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共

有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(Λ)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意： 1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Today we were organized for a short trip to the West Hill. We set out by the school bus at 7:30 a.m. The weather was pleasure and every one of us was excited. After two hour’s ride, we arrived there at nine thirty. We began our programs the moment as we got off from the bus. We played games on the hillside and swimming in the river. After that we had our picnic lunch. In the afternoon we walked along the river, that winds around the hills. We took a lot of photo and enjoyed ourselves very much. Time past quickly and we had to come back.It was over five o’clock that we returned school. What a good trip we had today! I’ll never forget it.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】by→in

【2】pleasure→pleasant/pleasing

【3】hour’s→hours’

【4】from去掉

【5】swimming→swam

【6】that→which

【7】photo→photos

【8】past→passed

【9】that→when

【10】returned后面加to

【解析】

【1】by→in 考查介詞。 by后面可以直接接名詞bus，但不能接the school bus，應(yīng)改為in。

【2】pleasure→pleasant/pleasing 考查形容詞。pleasure是名詞，不能用來形容事物，故把pleasure改為pleasant/pleasing，pleasant意為“愉快的”，pleasing意為“令人愉快的”，都符合語境。

【3】hour’s→hours’ 考查名詞。前面有two，故應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)的所有格。

【4】from去掉 考查動詞詞組。get off表示“下車、下馬等”，off即為介詞，后面直接跟名詞作賓語，不能再用其他介詞。

【5】swimming→swam 考查動詞的時態(tài)。swam與前面的played構(gòu)成并列謂語動詞。

【6】that→which 考查定語從句。先行詞是river，指物，that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，故改為which。

【7】photo→photos 考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。photo為可數(shù)名詞，前面有a lot of修飾，故此處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【8】past→passed 考查動詞的時態(tài)。past為介詞，不可作謂語，應(yīng)改為過去式的動詞passed作謂語。

【9】that→when 考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句辨析。本句并非強(qiáng)調(diào)句，將it was 和that去掉：we returned school over five o’clock，并不是一個完整的句子，句子缺少時間狀語，故把that改為when

【10】returned后面加to 考查固定短語。return表示“回到”時，后面應(yīng)接to。