Question

12．假定你是高中學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Jim即將升入中國的一所高中學(xué)習(xí)，想讓你給他一些學(xué)習(xí)建議．請你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．與老師交流，征求老師意見；
2．上課積極參與討論，專心聽講，做好筆記；
3．課后積極完成作業(yè)，鞏固知識．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；   2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Jim，
I'm delighted to hear that you'll be a senior student．Now，I'd like to share my study tips with you．
First，you'd better communicate with your teachers regularly．In this way，they may offer some great advice on both your study and life．（高分句型一） Second，why not involve yourself in each class actively，listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later？Third，it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school，which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind．（高分句型二）
I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life．（高分句型三）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給Jim一些學(xué)習(xí)建議．請你給他寫一封電子郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：與老師交流，征求老師意見；上課積極參與討論，專心聽講，做好筆記；課后積極完成作業(yè)，鞏固知識． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文是一篇電子郵件，采用三段式．語言簡練，段落清晰，布局合理，運用高級句子．Having learned that you'll be a senior student，how delighted I am．現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式做時間狀語，同時使用感嘆句；take notes carefully so that you can review later？使用目的狀語從句；it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school，which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind．動詞不定式做真正的主語，句中并運用非限制性定語從句和賓語從句；另外，F(xiàn)irst，Second，why not involve yourself in的運用為文章增色添彩．

解答 Dear Jim，
     I'm delighted to hear that you'll be a senior student．Now，I'd like to share my study tips with you．
     First，you'd better communicate with your teachers regularly．In this way，they may offer some great advice on both your study and life．（高分句型一） Second，why not involve yourself in each class actively，listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later？Third，it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school，which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind．（高分句型二）
     I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life．（高分句型三）
     Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．