6.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus.It was very crowded and I had to stand.Besides me,there was a woman hold a little boy in her arms.In front of her,a young man occupies two seats,pretending to be sleeping.I heard the little boy curious asking his mother,"What's wrong with the uncle?"I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man.Beyond her expectations,the woman answered with a smile,"Be quiet.This uncle must very tired because of hard work."The young man must have heard the word.His face turned red but offered one seat to the woman at once.