Question

某中學(xué)生英文網(wǎng)站發(fā)起了以“杜絕校園浪費(fèi)”（Put an end to waste on campus）為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇應(yīng)征短文。
1. 描述你身邊的一些浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象；
2. 說(shuō)明浪費(fèi)的危害性及節(jié)約的重要性；
3. 反省你自身的浪費(fèi)行為并提出改進(jìn)措施。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)120左右，開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
Put an end to waste on campus
Nowadays wasting is common on campus. __________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Put an end to waste on campus
Nowadays wasting is common on campus. Water, electricity, paper and food are habitually wasted among many students, which, worse still, some of them consider acceptable.
If every student wastes a gram of rice and throws away a piece of paper every day, the total waste would be beyond our imagination. We all know that resources are running out. Even small resources, when used well, can help meet needs and aid development.
However, it’s easier said than done. Sometimes I myself waste money buying too much food. And there’re times I forget to turn off the lights before leaving the classroom. To change it, first, I’ll strengthen my responsibility to save resources, making the most of water, electricity and paper. Second, I’ll learn to save money, trying to be an economist. （124words）

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)主題“杜絕校園浪費(fèi)”（Put an end to waste on campus）寫一篇短文，寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，需要學(xué)生用自己的語(yǔ)言形成連貫的文章。首先，描述浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象；其次說(shuō)明浪費(fèi)的危害；最后提出改進(jìn)措施。使用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作，注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)和時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了一些重要語(yǔ)法知識(shí)：定語(yǔ)從句which, worse still, some of them consider acceptable；賓語(yǔ)從句We all know that resources are running out；省略when used well；非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞To change it, making the most of water, electricity and paper和trying to be an economist；諺語(yǔ)it’s easier said than done；固定搭配waste money buying too much food等，使作文的等級(jí)得到了提升；
范文使用了較多的短語(yǔ)：throws away, a piece of, worse still, beyond our imagination, meet needs, turn off等，充實(shí)了作文的內(nèi)容；
范文注意使用However, first, Second等來(lái)銜接上下文；使作文在結(jié)構(gòu)上顯得緊湊。
【考點(diǎn)】命題作文