Question

你校某研究性學(xué)習(xí)小組正在開展關(guān)于“學(xué)生與家長、老師、同學(xué)之間的關(guān)系處理”的調(diào)查。請你就這一話題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：
1．現(xiàn)狀：關(guān)系處理總體情況較好，但仍存在一些問題，如與同學(xué)吵架、自我意識強(qiáng)、不聽家長和老師的教育，甚至頂撞老師、家長等。
2．你個人的改進(jìn)意見(至少兩條)。
注意：1.詞數(shù)150左右；
2．首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
A survey about the relationship between students and teachers，family members or classmates is being made by a research study group of our school.________________________________

Answer 1

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A survey about the relationship between students and teachers，family members or classmates is being made by a research study group of our school. Generally speaking，we are getting on well with each other. However，there exist some problems. Some students are easy to lose their temper because of anxiety and study burden. Sometimes they are too self­centered. What’s worse，they sometimes quarrel with others，and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers and speak against their parents and teachers，which is very disappointing.
In my opinion，we middle school students should make our efforts to improve the situation. First，we should respect our parents and teachers as well as our classmates. Second，when we are not feeling happy，we can have a heart­to­heart chat with our friends or teachers or even parents. It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice.

試題分析：這是一篇以寫調(diào)查報告形式的作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。
點評：一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。