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18．假定你是李華，向在你校學(xué)習(xí)的美國交換生Adam借了一本英文小說，但不慎丟失，一時又買不到．請給他寫電子郵件，說明情況．要點包括：
 1．表示歉意；    2．說明物品丟失的經(jīng)過；    3．提出可能的解決方案．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)使行文連貫；
 3．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Adam，
                                              
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來．動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準確表達．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語borrow sth  from 從哪借；in a hurry 匆忙地；help sb do sth幫某人做某事；I like it so much that I took it with me wherever I went．這個句子中運用wherever引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句；Unfortunately，the other day during a trip to Beijing I was in such a hurry to get off the train that I forgot to put it back in my bag這個句子中運用到such..that..如此以致于；Hard as I tried，I was not able to find the novel in any bookstore here這個句子運用as引導(dǎo)的倒裝句，表示雖然；

解答 Dear Adam，
  I'm deeply sorry but I have to let you know that I lost the English novel Gone with the Wind which I borrowed from you a month ago．（高分句型）I like it so much that I took it with me wherever I went．Unfortunately，the other day during a trip to Beijing I was in such a hurry to get off the train that I forgot to put it back in my bag．（高分句型）I'm so sorry as I know the novel was a birthday present from your father．
   Hard as I tried，I was not able to find the novel in any bookstore here．（高分句型）I wonder if you would like to take the Chinese-English version which will hopefully help improve your Chinese．（高分句型）
   Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．