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1．假如你是中學(xué)生李平．最近你校規(guī)定：學(xué)生在校期間，禁止到校外就餐．現(xiàn)在，請(qǐng)你就此事給校報(bào)英文版編輯寫(xiě)一封信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．學(xué)校制定此規(guī)定的理由；
2．同學(xué)們對(duì)此規(guī)定的反應(yīng)及理由；
3．你的看法．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)；
      2．文中不得透露你和所在學(xué)校的真實(shí)名字；
      3．參考詞匯：食堂 canteen[C]
Dear editor，
Dear editor，
I'm writing to talk about our school's new rule that all students are forbidden to eat out during school days．（說(shuō)明原因）
The school says，for one thing，the food outside the campus isn't healthy and its safety can't be guaranteed，and for another，if students have meals in the canteen，they may save money because the food there is cheaper．（高分句型一） However，some students are against the rule for two reasons．First，they dislike the food in the canteen because of its poor quality．In addition，the school seems to try to make more money if all students are forced to have every meal in school．（高分句型二）（闡述理由）
Personally，to make more students have meal inside the campus，the school should make the food taste nicer and offer them a larger variety of food，too．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Pin
Best wishes．
                                                             Yours，
                                                                     Li Ping．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The school says，for one thing，the food outside the campus isn't healthy and its safety can't be guaranteed，and for another，if students have meals in the canteen，they may save money because the food there is cheaper．
高分句型二：
In addition，the school seems to try to make more money if all students are forced to have every meal in school．
句型一 ①if students have meals in the canteen 該句使用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句
            ②because the food there is cheaper．該句是一個(gè)由because 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句
            ③for one thing…for anther…固定短語(yǔ) 一方面…另一方面
句型二 ①the school seems to try to make more money 該句謂語(yǔ)部分使用了系動(dòng)詞seem的用法：seem to do sth
           ②if all students are forced to have every meal…該句為if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句

解答 Dear editor，
   I'm writing to talk about our school's new rule that all students are forbidden to eat out during school days．（說(shuō)明原因）
   The school says，for one thing，the food outside the campus isn't healthy and its safety can't be guaranteed，and for another，if students have meals in the canteen，they may save money because the food there is cheaper．（高分句型一）  However，some students are against the rule for two reasons．First，they dislike the food in the canteen because of its poor quality．In addition，the school seems to try to make more money if all students are forced to have every meal in school．（高分句型二）（闡述理由）
   Personally，to make more students have meal inside the campus，the school should make the food taste nicer and offer them a larger variety of food，too．
   Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Pin

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