Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增力口、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\)劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

A discussion about hiking had been held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel healthier, fresher or more harmonious with the nature. They find themselves deep at?tracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have ever been to, and accidents have happened now and then be?cause poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think not safe to organize such dangerous activities. They make sug?gestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

Answer 1

A discussion about hiking had been held in our class. Some 

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students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel

healthier, fresher  or more harmonious with the  nature. They 

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find themselves   deep  attracted by the beauty of nature. They 

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can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains. But nowadays relaxed

some hikers even begin to explore the places people have ever

never

been to, and accidents have happened now and then because    

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poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life . The

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other students in our class think  not safe to organize such dan

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gerous activities.  They make suggestions which laws should be

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passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activi?ties.