Question

【題目】Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to be a/an ______ in group work”. （以“在小組活動(dòng)中我想做_________”為題,寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}紙上把作文題目補(bǔ)充完整。

在課堂小組合作活動(dòng)中，有不同的角色分工，每個(gè)角色都非常重要。假設(shè)有以下四個(gè)角色：小組長(zhǎng)（leader）,記錄員（secretary），發(fā)言人（spokesperson）和觀察員（observer）,你想選擇哪個(gè)角色？為什么？你將如何做好你的工作？

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

I want to be a secretary in group work. In a group activity, each role is of great importance. As to me, I’d like to be a secretary. I am a good listener and recorder, so I believe I am qualified for this role.

Firstly, I will pay much attention to each speaker’s speech and write down the main ideas, including the good ones or bad ones. Besides that, I will mark the information which means a lot to the topic. Also, I will sit by the leader and show him the creative and valuable thoughts from time to time so that the leader can remind the following speakers to focus on a certain point to make sure that the discussion can go more efficiently and smoothly. Lastly, at the end of the discussion I will clearly share with the members what I have recorded.

To sum up, I’d love to be a secretary in group work and I’m sure I will be a great one.

【解析】

題干解讀：這是一篇話題作文，表達(dá)的是我的期愿“在小組活動(dòng)中我想做什么”，也就是充當(dāng)怎樣的角色。材料中給出了四個(gè)角色：小組長(zhǎng)（leader）,記錄員（secretary），發(fā)言人（spokesperson）和觀察員（observer），首先我們要確定自己所選的角色，然后說明選擇的原因，分析所寫角色的小組工作內(nèi)容及自己會(huì)怎樣充當(dāng)好這個(gè)角色。

例文評(píng)價(jià)：例文采取三段式，第一段開門見山點(diǎn)明自己想要充當(dāng)?shù)慕巧�，并且說明了自己選擇的原因 ；第二段詳細(xì)的介紹了自己將會(huì)如何做好這份工作；第三段總結(jié)，再次點(diǎn)明自己選擇角色的原因，與第一段呼應(yīng)。例文以第一人稱，并采取一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)相結(jié)合的時(shí)態(tài)來寫。

高分亮點(diǎn)：

短語(yǔ)：want to be想成為；be qualified for有資格；pay attention to 注意；write down記下；from time to time不時(shí)；focus on專注于；make sure確保；point to指向；To sum up要而論之。

句型：I will sit by the leader and show him the creative and valuable thoughts from time to time so that the leader can remind the following speakers to focus on a certain point to make sure that the discussion can go more efficiently and smoothly. 我會(huì)坐在領(lǐng)導(dǎo)身邊，不時(shí)向他展示有創(chuàng)意和有價(jià)值的想法，這樣領(lǐng)導(dǎo)就可以提醒下面的演講者專注于某一點(diǎn)，以確保討論能夠更高效、更順利地進(jìn)行。so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句并使用大量亮點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)。